by AllHailTheHeartbreaker Apr 5, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Remy's going out tonight |
by Kaila
The end rhyming got a little bit to repetitive for my taste but thats just me other then that nice job! |
Nice poem. The flow was great. |
by firexdancer
Wow, this is sad, im not sure i entirely got it, but it flowed perfecTly, and it was sweet but sad, all in all it was a pretty good poem, so 4/5 gabriella |