I liked this great job

Well written poem, altough it could have been longer... anyways good job , 5/5

This reminds me of one of my friends that is having problems at home with things like that.
its real sad:[ but good job writing it!

Awww...I wish it were longer!!! I loved this poem it was good and full of hate I too have a poem about abuse quite similar to this...

So sad and sorrowful..you feel the poem's sadness
And the flow was great
Beatifully penned
Well done
Take care
Laura

I loved this poem so much, because these are words i can relate to too well. keep up the great work, your work is really meaningful =]
nuff luv x