My One and Only True Friend

by Wallace   Apr 5, 2007


It was my first time
How can I forget?
The things we did
The things we said

I cried I laughed
With my greatest friend
The moments shared
We shall never forget

It's at this point in life
I pause the daily rushes to think of you
The memories we once shared
Are all that's left of our friendship?

If only it didn't happen
If only it didn't come to past
Then the memories we shared
Would still be in our hearts

If it wasn't for that evil deed
Then maybe we would be together again
Sharing with each other time and time again
But I always knew, good things never last

My one and only true friend
Vanished without saying good bye
Just because of
The bullet of a gun

But now you're at a better place
Better than this corrupted land
You're with the heavenly hosts
Along side Christ the Mighty Hand

But don't worry I wish to see you soon
To be beside you again, my friend
I'll see you again but in heaven this time
My one and only true friend

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    The flow and the rhythym was kinda bumpy but the other than that the poem was very real and seemed like you spent time on it and spilled your guts out! so great job 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "My one and only true friend
    Vanished without saying good bye
    Just because of
    The bullet of a gun"

    ^^ I certainly didn't see that coming, I thought this was just going to be about a broken friendship, that was a surprising twist.

    I loved the emotion in this, by the time I finished reading, I had tears in my eyes.

    I found the flow to be good for the most part but shaky in a couple of places.

    Try eliminating some of the fillers (I, and, you, etc) and you'll find the flow goes so much smoother.

  • 17 years ago

    by DaddysLittlePrincess

    Absolutely amazing i love love love the way its written and how its a sad poem but its optimistic too great job!

    thanks for the comment on mine

    -DaddysLittlePrincess

  • 17 years ago

    by Kimmie

    I really love this pem and i knw how this stuff feels like it kinda suxs and the only thing to look foward to is u may see each other again

  • 17 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Awww. this reminds me of my friend, well written. its humbling! Thanks for the comments, i just love reading your poems!

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