by Wallace Apr 5, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I hear your voice and my whole world wakes up |
!!!! This is really sweet :P Good job--I don't think I have anything to say about it, the only thing is that the first stanza thing doesn't end in 'you' like all the others...not really a problem, but it does a little bit of screwing with your uniformity...but it's beautiful...yeah! |
by malina
Flowed very well |