by Wallace Apr 5, 2007
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Why? |
This is a amusing poem |
by carissalynn
Becuz God made it that way haha [[= this was a great poem and such great questions. I liked this. |
I really liked this poem, but I think the "why's" at the beginning and end of each stanza (the whys that are not followed by anything) should have been cut out because it really does get repetitive. but of course thats your personal artistic choice. anyways, excellent job, a really beautiful poem! |
by Hatori
I think that this piece has a lot of repeating in it and kind of loses the attention of the reader at the end. Don't get me wrong, I like poems based on this topic, but the ending doesn't seem to complement the poem. I truly do love your choice of words though :D. Keep it up! |
by Juice
WOW you have a real poetic sense of mind. I mean im not anybody but u write with such feeling you are defnitly going to go far in this |