Comments : Why

  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    Because that's how they should be :)

    very good questions to think about.

    welcome to the site Wallace! :)

    how long have you been writing poetry?

    Marjan

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    To show us the beauty of life, I believe.
    Loved the way you asked questions.
    Makes readers ask themselves things.
    I believe knowing why nature's so exiquisite is something everyone should know. :]

  • 17 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Why?

    Well because it has a long tail of course ;)

    Excellent little poem, it raises some interesting messages
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Juice

    WOW you have a real poetic sense of mind. I mean im not anybody but u write with such feeling you are defnitly going to go far in this

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    I think that this piece has a lot of repeating in it and kind of loses the attention of the reader at the end. Don't get me wrong, I like poems based on this topic, but the ending doesn't seem to complement the poem. I truly do love your choice of words though :D. Keep it up!

    Hatori

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    I really liked this poem, but I think the "why's" at the beginning and end of each stanza (the whys that are not followed by anything) should have been cut out because it really does get repetitive. but of course thats your personal artistic choice. anyways, excellent job, a really beautiful poem!

    ~jas~

  • 17 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Becuz God made it that way haha [[= this was a great poem and such great questions. I liked this.
    Carissa E>

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    This is a amusing poem