Your Kiss

by wild angel   Apr 5, 2007


Your kiss is like
strawberries
sweet and lingers on my lips
your kiss is like
the rain
romantic and calming
your kiss is like
the ocean
crazy and energetic
your kiss is
the last
kiss I ever want to feel
against my ever so delicate lips

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  • 17 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    Re-arrange the sentences a bit , it will help the flow of the poem greatlly
    it's good , but surely you can make it beter

    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by lostXinXlife

    It's nice. but kinda short. i still like it though.
    xoxox
    miss lostxinxlife

  • 17 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Nice poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Beautiful!!! i loved it, every word was pure and cute! great job!

    luv always---tara

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    Aww that was sooo good!!!...i loved it!1.. 5/5 from me, and would you mind commenting some of my new poems too!.. thanks soo much

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