How very sad. This poem has a good flow and rhyme scheme...well written...keep writing! 5/5 Debbie

Omg...you write such great powerful poems..

Excellent. well written. 5/5

Nice poems your a really good poet nice work.

Wow.. a well written poem indeed.. keep up the gud work!

Excellent poem. You can really see a boy in this situation.

Wow that was very sad and touching. It had a great flow. 5/5

Wow.
I Really Liked It.
Very Deep And Sad.
One Of The Best Poems I Have Ever Seen.
Good Job! Keep It Up =]

"A poor lost soul, stranded on the streets
Tired and exhausted with nothing to eat"

The starting of a very good write. Captured the reader with the wonderful flow and sad message.

"All the pain and torture he kept within
Now you tell me, what kind of world do we live in? "

A very good question. Sometimes, people get so wrapped up in theirselves, they don't see what is in front of them.

A very emotional write, that is done from someone who's depth of understanding out numbers his years. Thought provoking.

Well done.
Jeannie

That sent a shiver right through me ,it was so well written ,your really have a great talent for writting ,please do keep it up as I will be looking forward to future writes.

Poor kid. :| I love your poem.. I felt the boy's misery.. 5/5!

I really liked your poem. It is hard to remain positive when faced with a negative reality. As a caregiver this poem really touched me.

This poem is really good I love it its one of the best I ever read

p.s thanks for commenting mine

Yes this was one of your better poems, Good story as well as a good topic, nice structure and rhyming and you did stay on track while rhyming so thats a pluss..
It was also a very interesting thing to end the poem with that question...
One negative thing to me was that it could have been a bit longer but thats just me

Overall Great Job Wallace =)

That gave me chills and brought tears to my eyes good stuff i'll be looking for more

I love it. What really gets to me is that there are kids out there in the world without anyone who'll give a care about them. I knwo this may be really corny and all, but I hope that one day there will be a way to help them in their times of neediness.

Love it,
Katt

WOW!!! I love it... it's an amazing piece of work! You did a amazing job... the flow was great and everything just fit so nicely... 5/5 all the way!!

Much love and the best of wishes!
@!Jezzika!@

*Tear* This poem is incredible!! The ryhming was superior and I loved it completely. I don't know what to say. You are a gifted poet and I look forward to reading other poems of yours. The first part was my favorite though, and the ending complemented it. Brilliant piece of work, 5/5!

I might have some poems that interest you, so if you want, could you R/R/C on a couple of my poems?? You don't have to if you don't want to though.

Thanks, Hatori.
hatecanneverheal

Awesome poem! so full of emotion and bringing to focus one of society's many faults. keep writin'. 5/5

Wow awesome job i liked this one more then the wind one i found this one addressed life problems more and i respect anything like that so this is wonderful awesome job and thx again for the comments

keenan