Wallace
This is such a haunting sad piece...It brought the tears. That a child could be forgotten in this manner is terrible. Excellent job on this piece.

There his small fragile bones hung in the air
And still to this day no one knew he was there

This image just really makes me cry.
Take care Cindy

Very sad, i started crying! but your really good.

Well written poem good work keep writing.

WiLd RoSe

Please comment on mine thank you

This is a very good poem, I like the 2 line stanza approach. Keep up the good work.

Great work, I love the simple structure combined with the intresting vocab.

{5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

This poems really beautifully sad. It has alot of emotion running throughout it and it flowed amazingly well done on this piece.
~mel

A very emotional write my friend. Brought tears to my eyes, being so sad. It is a cruel world and yet we still can find Hope. 5/5
Peace and Blessings

WOW NICE JOB!!!! IHAVE NEVER READ ANYTHING SO POWERFUL. Anyways keep up the good work.

I really like this one.
its so true.
and it gives me that feeling.
its really good i wish i could write like this.
nice job :]

Very sad....heartwrenching...well written...good flow and rhyme....5/5

Wo0o0o0ow this is really an amazing poem describing real facts in the life.... good wording and rthyme!!
really i like it so much ;)
keep it on :D
check on my new poems, vote and if u have comments plz lemme know;)
c u :)

Beautiful, you captured a moment and you created a picture
love ya work

Wow, very nice. The wording as well as the meaning behind it.

This poem told an extremely sad story. and its even more sad that it's true. an amazing write! never stop!! 5/5

` Liz =]

Wow that was good really good!!! it made me think of the world as it is today well done your good! takecare melxxx

Omg....thats sad....but VERY true, our world is very cruel at times!!

Well done Wallace. You're a talented young man :-)

The last stanza made me go... i don't knwo thta answer after reading this. this was so heartfelt and playing on my emotions.

5/5 David

Dude dat was awesum!i loved dat poem!!!

This is such a sad poem.
i love poems where i can relate to.
and this is yet another poem i can relate to. im not sure why, but it reminds me of my little brother. amazing work.
-jenae.