by Daz Mellow Apr 5, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
I held the knife, |
by StandStill
Wow. this made me shudder! great poem, doll |
by justeene
This was good kept me reading though couldnt get into it as it didnt really flow, however good job |
by JaMeS
I liked the imagedry and the idea that this event [which im sure wasnt in real life you killing someone lol] deadend you inside and how its the tortue within that hut you well thats what i read into it :) |
Wow excellent poem, i love how u wrote it n everythin.. great work.. keep writin 5/5 |
by Crystal Gaze
I loved it Marsha.. |