Comments : Forgive Them For Their Sins.

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Jenna, what a touching story. It was extremely well written and by adding names and emotions to each person, it made the poem more real than many that I have read. Fantastic job!

    Ciao~

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    A very real look into the effects and happenings of drinking and driving.
    This write holds a very strong deep message!
    Though sad ... the reality of it makes for an excellent poem and will surely makes those who drink and drive think.
    Take care
    Luanne

  • 17 years ago

    by AngelWithTheBrokenWings

    Really good.

    AngelWithTheBrokenWings