Wow, I really loved this poem the way you portrayed how drugs make you feel and what happens when yo u use drugs. I loved the flow and the ryhme scheme it was fantastic. This poem was just amazing all together definitly wins a 5/5 from me. Well done ~mel

Amazing poem great flow, I loved how you repeated these lines:

"We're going down,
Like never before.
We're losing grip,
And hitting this hard, cold floor."

Keep it up! 5/5

I liked the emotional side to this poem, the flow was great..but yet some of the rhymes felt forced as I read them. Your rhymes need to feel a little more free in poetry or it takes away from the quality. I did love the imagery and emotion though, great work.

"We're going down,
Like never before.
We're losing grip,
And hitting this hard, cold floor. "

^^ I loved the repetition of those lines.

(:

Alot of emotion.
Very well written.
The flow was nice.
5/5

~Chelsea

Good poem. I liked the pun in this poem. And I liked the way you repeated the lines:

'We're going down,
Like never before.
We're losing grip,
And hitting this hard, cold floor.'

Good job 5/5

Wow this poem was very long and i didnt even notice till after i was done because it was just that good