Rewind.

by SmileeItsBritt   Apr 6, 2007


Somewhere along the storyline you lost it.
You tried not to, but you were played.
You became another hero in my eyes
and with that said, you begin to fade.
You got caught up in my tangent of lies
So well crafted in ways all too intricate
Rewind.Pause.
You say my words are to deep to forget.
Yet it seems you have forgotten.
Play.

Failed attempts at communication
This broken record of regrets
Continually playing these overused phrases
I concealed the truth at my own expense.
It seems your words fell short this time,
It also appears as though you've won
Ignoring my need for explanations
Is like staring down the barrel of a gun.

Fast Forward.
Will these efforts go un-noticed?
Do you think I'll leave these thoughts alone?
No no no, We cant rewind
But I'll never let this go.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Painted By Colors llInLovell

    Lovely! <33
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Despite the choppy flow, which is the first thing I noticed when I opened this to read it, I actually REALLY liked this. It held depth and raw emotion, and it had great imagery and vocabulary. I actually really liked the rewind, play, fast forward lines; which I didn't think I would because they didn't flow, but they really tied the poem together. One thing though, in the line, "Do you think I'll leave theses thoughts alone?" .. theses should be these. Other than that, AMAZING job Darling.

    5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Friends: the pleasure or hurt of life.
    You did very well on this.
    Keep it up
    D.L

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I like how you use the words rewind, pause, play and fast forward to tell what that person said and what you want to know, I hope you get what I'm trying to say lol anyways I liked. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Friendship can bless and it can hurt. good writing, good poetry

    your servant:
    david

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