I know what this is like
it's not cool
this poem was though
great job

I thought that your poem was amzing, deep and beauitful, every line was different but had amwazing flow!---tara

Awhh i like this poem. i gave it a 4/5 because the way it said "im sorry" at the beginning of every line kind of made it boring in a way but you still did a good job writing it!

The stanza change was a little off but that's easily fixed the poem itself was good the only errors you made were like structual errors so nice job!

A little too repetitive...it tricks mind but other than that..showed emotions and so honest
Keep it up
Laura

Aww this was really sweet, coz atleast if you've made a mistake, you see it now. i can relate. the flow and rhyme was good.
nuff luv x

Aww this was really sweet, coz atleast if you've made a mistake, you see it now. i can relate. the flow and rhyme was good.
nuff luv x

Aww this was really sweet, coz atleast if you've made a mistake, you see it now. i can relate. the flow and rhyme was good.
nuff luv x

I'm sorry the only one I cared about was me.
I'm sorry I didn't care what you had to say.
I'm sorry for everything
^ I thought this last line was a little bit too short for it to flow well.

I'm sorry I was wrong.
^ There should be a coma after "sorry"

Awh, this was quite sad. The flow was pretty good except for certain parts and the emotion was clear. I would have liked a little more detail but the simple approach worked too. Try and even out the lengths of your lines and that will help it flow better. Nicely done, 5/5

:( I lil bit sad..but i like sad :) lol. I loved it. I like the 'i'm sorrys'. The flow was good. Maybe a few parts as Jessy said, but i still think it was excellent..Keep smiling. Xx Chrissie

This is a sad and deep poem. i have one similar to that except its meant for me. this is a great one. 5/5 for me

... I can relate in this poem!.. Good job! keep up the good work :) Another great poem by the way