Beautiful , truely amazing, i loved the meaning, the message, it kind of seamed that every word flowed togeher.---tara

Oh well done with this poem. excellent in every way. it was long but i wanted there to be more.

5/5 David

Oooh! Very good! I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yay!

I know this feeling all too well. I think that you have somehow managed to paint my portrait without having ever seen me.

Very nicely said and all so true in too many aspects.

--Sher

Omgosh this poem was truly amazing!!...i loved it...and i love the way you write... 5/5 from me and thanks for the comment....

you play the clarinet? so do i!! haha and the flute, and im learning guitar haha

yeah my bf just broke up w. me for like no reason... he was my twin brothers bff, and he came over one night and he was playing guitar w. my brother, and i asked him to watch a movie w. me, and my bro was like yeah go.. and he got sooo angry like he was like I DIDNT KNOW GOING OUT W. YOU WOULD MEAN LOSING MY BFF.. and my bros the what!? you didnt lose me.. and he ran out to his car and i said where are you going?! and he said im done and drove up my driveway....

so idk.. but were still friends, and he says he regrets breaking up w. me... but this is the 2nd time we broke up, and if we were going out still, saturday wouldve been our 1 month anniversary :(

I love how you will have a really depressing poem and then all of sudden you have the perky authors note. You crack me up Danielle.

//Khrystyne\\