This was incrediblly(sp?) amazing...!!! Sryy i cannot spell hehe! but seriously I felt lost in your words like I could just imagine spring time and sunny and flowers and everything and I imagined someone beautiful sitting down in the spring reading this it was wonderfully written 5/5

The imagery of this poem was just amazing, this poem was definitly greatly written with good emotions running through it.. Well done 5/5 ~mel

Great poem. The flow was excellent and the structure was good. I loved it.
Keep it up 5/5

:Sarah:

I liked this poem alot.
You did a great job.
5/5

~Chelsea

A lot of love, feeling, emotion, and a whole lot of right on.

the best love poem i've read in ages. oh and i don't flatter people. i tell it like it is

your servant:
david

This was an intersting poem. the repeats were nice. i didnt get the word free in this line : I drink to drown my regrets and free,

it just doesnt sound quite right. 4/5

"But some promises are made to fast"
I really love that line, its SO true!
Very well written!