This poem is amazing. Very well written. The flow was really good. well done.
5/5

~Chelsea

I liked it again with the flow it was a tad bit off but other than that i think you did a pretty good job

This was better. Very cute poem!
I really liked this one. The rhyme
seemed to be forced in some patches
of the poem. Well thank you for the
comments. I hope you didn't take my
comments offensive, just giving you
advice for future reference. God Bless
5/5 <3Tayyy

I wish that everything was like this - wishing for one more chance. I tend to do that a lot.
This was a beautiful poem.
The flow was flawless.
The word usage was good.
& the emotions were strong & clear.
Fantastic job!! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Good poem.
It flowed well and the emotion was shown.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]