This has to be my favourite of your's...I LOVE it!
''Then who am I to trample through?''
I adore that line, I found it to have great impact and meaning.
I thought in a couple of places the flow seemed a little off, but apart from that this was just beautiful!!
I loved the last stanza, it brought tears to my eyes, I think you did a fantastic job with this!!
Aww... i can really relate to this C.
true love is when you step back and put your heart aside for the one you love.. but always remember that true love prevails..
5/5
*Gem*