Comments : Chained Love

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This has to be my favourite of your's...I LOVE it!
    ''Then who am I to trample through?''
    I adore that line, I found it to have great impact and meaning.
    I thought in a couple of places the flow seemed a little off, but apart from that this was just beautiful!!
    I loved the last stanza, it brought tears to my eyes, I think you did a fantastic job with this!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    A sad but beautiful poem.

    I couldn't bear to ruin what we have built,
    Or carry the burden, feel the guilt.
    If she loves you as much as I do
    Then who am I to trample through?

    Sometimes we do trample because we follow our heart blindly.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Aww... i can really relate to this C.
    true love is when you step back and put your heart aside for the one you love.. but always remember that true love prevails..
    5/5
    *Gem*