She Says

by Curry   Apr 6, 2007


Shes laying face down in the dirt,
All because of him.
She says it doesn't hurt,
And she'll say it again.
She says shes not gonna cry,
But she really wants to die.
She says everything is alright,
When she lays in bed and crys all night.
She says shes fine,
But you can tell behind her eyes,
Shes dying inside.
Shes says he did her no harm,
But just take a look at her arm.
Its filled with cuts,
She says shes ok,
But shes gone nuts.
She says all her feeling for him are gone,
But shes really missing him cus hes been gone for so long.
She says all the memories of him have faded away,
But she really thinks about him every minute of the day.
She says shes glad he's gone,
But really without him it's so hard for her to stay strong.
She misses him more and more everyday,
She only says all this to make it seem like shes ok.

written by: curry on 3.12.07

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Crys
    ^Cries
    Well, I'm not a fan of internet slang. No offence you shouldn't be on here if you can't spell, or write correctly. I thought the poem was good, like I said you need to work on a couple of things. God Bless 4/5
    <3Tayyy

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    In the beginning this poem reminded me of "face down" by the jumpsuit apparatus. was it your inspiration in any way love? some of the rhyming schemes seemed really forced but overall great write love. 4/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Well done on this. you seem to be able to write many poems. and no two close to being the same. well wat i have read.

    5/5 David