Amazing poem. Alot of emotion put into this.
Very good. 5/5

~Chelsea

Okay first the flow was a tad off...next time try the syllabol count on each line because some lines are to short and some to long.

Really good poem.
Like I said you need stanzas. Another advice, try use the same amount of syllables in your lines. Not the exact but similar as or same amount of words. It won't through the flow off. Keep up with the writing. The more you write the better you will get. God Bless 5/5
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My favorite of yours that I have read so far. The emotions were clear & strong. And the flow was better than the others. Fantastic job, keep writing! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.