Hmm. Interesting. A tad cliched, but aren't all love poems. The flow was a bit choppy on a few parts, but you did get your emotions through and that's what matters. Keep it up.

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Hey it's not stupid the only thing that got a little old was the repitition of "Boy I..." but that's alright great poem anyways

I didn't think this was gay or stupid at all!
Luch .Fcuk-* had a good point about the cliche, but hell, all my love poems are too, lol =)
I thought it was great
5/5
*Gem*

This is such a lovely poem, it shows how much you love him. 5/5 from me.

Kalee

Cliche? Yes. But when it comes to love poems, when aren't they? Lmao. =]
And no, it was not stupid at all. Actually, it was beautiful poem. =]
I loved it! 5/5
Wonderful write, keep it up!

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Great poem. It's not stupid. You did a really good job. Keep it up! 5/5

~Chelsea

Okay first no poem is ever stupid it's an expression of our inner most feelings that's like saying your feelings and beliefes are stupid. Well I liked this one it got a little to repetitive for my taste but I liked it.

I suggest use stanzas. It will make your poem more organized. Also use a rhyme scheme instead of jumping from rhyming to not rhyming. The poem was cute. Needs some work. God bless 4/5
<3Tayy