I liked this poem i think the flow was a lil off in some places but i think thats because it starts to ryhme then it doesnt ryhme anymore, i do think u did a great job with portraying what u were trying to say in this poem. Well done ~mel

Very sweet. Well written..if i was that guy i would believe you. Xx Chrissie

DANG... THE ONLY THING I CAN REALLY SAY... IS THAT IM GOING THROUGH THE SAME THING WITH MY BOYFRIEND... HE ALWAYS DOES THAT... I HOPE YOU GUYS GET THROUGH IT....

~*~JES-I-KA~*~

Awww.... that was so sweet.
& I can feel that you really do love this boy with alll your heart, just from reading this poem.
Perfect poem, keep it up! =]
5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.