This poems really beautifully sad the emotion was really cute and sad throughout it. Well done a good effort on this poem. ~mel

That is a very well written poem. Very beautiful aswell. Keep up the awesome work hun. Xx Chrissie

Amazing poem. very well written.
5/5

~Chelsea

Another great poem

Aw. This was a sweet poem, and I'm sure many could relate to it. The parallel structure in this poem was nice.

Aww this was so sweet "I still wish you thought that we're meant to be,
But most of all,
I still wish you would just love me." that part was so amazing. I loved it, there were some rough parts in the flowing factor but in all thise was so sweet and charming. I love your writing style, so simple and sweet. Great job!!

This is really nice. It is always hare to stop loving some one. I know how it feels. anyway this is a lovely poem. 5/5

Kalee

Amazing.
Beautiful, yet so sweet & cute at the same time.
The flow was flawless & the word usage was great.
Fantastic write hun, keep it up!
5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.