Forlorn war dreams

by kiara   Apr 6, 2007


Forlorn are my dreams
Which travel in the night
Disguised by the bloody screams
Which is our burden for the right

The time clock spins
Another death is not prevailed
The land grows with mens sins
Has perfection really failed?

The soil of our brothering
Saves us from the conclusion
In which we hoped tomorrow would bring
For actions invite confusion

Withered away like a winter flower
Broken hurt and scared
The ripest fruit left is sour
For not a soul truly cared

Diseased with imperfection
A battle needed not
More is left then a reflection
For memories imprint nights of the last shot

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  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    A beautifull poem :) and so colorfull :)
    made me think if my lastnights dream lol
    love it 99/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    A very good message. The flow was well done except the last line, but overall a good poem.

    "The time clock spins
    Another death is not prevailed
    The land grows with mens sins
    Has perfection really failed?"

    Loved these lines.

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job on your poem....very deep thoughts.

    The time clock spins
    Another death is not prevailed
    The land grows with mens sins
    Has perfection really failed?

    This stanza stood out to me.
    Take care Cindy