Comments : Strangulation. suffocation.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cobrey

    It's good marina, i dont see haw that would help me. if its what u want then we can make it happen.
    cobrey

  • 17 years ago

    by DaNgErOuS EnTiCeMeNt

    Really sad but meaningful! I think its excellent!!

  • 17 years ago

    by FASHIONISTA

    Awwh, this is a really sad poem =(
    but its very well written,
    it would work out very nicely as a song too
    if you have time you should try and turn it into one =)
    thanks for the comment on my poem<3

    byebye
    `,vanessa;Ox

  • 17 years ago

    by Broken

    I love how you express urself in the poem
    great job. i loved it
    5/5