Heaven is waiting. [Reversed Etheree]

by Teria   Apr 6, 2007


Sheltered by love, withstanding lonely hearts.
Fearful at night; coldness overcomes.
Daydreams forever of my true love.
The one I shall be with 'til
forever is not enough.
For, heaven above
is waiting on
me to give
up my
heart.

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Reversed etheree consists of ten lines.
syllables: 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Heya, i really liked what you were doing with this poem but in the 3rd line you have 9 syllables instead of 8 and in the 5th line you have 7 intead of 6, i know these poems aint the easiest to write because ive written a few myself but yeahif you just fix up the errors then im sure this poem would be really good. ~mel

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