Great poem ,good wording and flow was good , did a great job, keep it up your friend Tracy dean 5/5 |
by Ajmal
Its amazing.... |
by LiNa
Great poem i loved it sound like me and my friend but i loved ur wording and i think u should write more i think u would be really good if u wrote more like this. |
by dee
Great message.. good flow. i loved it. |
by Liz
Awe. I love this. it's very cute and true and I can tell it comes from the heart. One thing that would help it though, is if you use less slangy words. Like *thought* instead of *thot*, etc. you know, just an opinion. other than that, i loved it. Keep writing!! hope to read more soon!! 5/5 |
by oddi tea
It really is a great poem but I find the slang a bit distracted. A perfect candidate for slang poetry and I like your work! |
ReallY aN amazinG joB oN thE poeM! iT floweD nicelY, yoU arE sO talenteD thE waY yoU writE. >>>>>>> excellenT writE.. |
by ali
This is soo sweet and true |
Great.... You are absolutely right A friend is some1 Who is with us in our good times and bad times..... Good job keep it up.......:-) |
Great job keep up eith the good work!!!!! 5/5 |
by kelleyana
Great poem. I am sure you are a good friend also because you know what it takes to be a friend. Kel. |
by Bekka Smekka
Good poem, bit slangy haha but great meaning and vibe!!! |
by Meena Krish
Yes that is what friends are for and they are |