Hiya.
I'm a great fan of your work, and secretly one of your many stalkers...

Anyway,
this poem depicts what a bath is. An escape from the world that is.
I think you could have done better with the layout of this poem though, but thats MY opinion, and you better not kill me for it.
I still think it was a good poem nonetheless, and one which I could relate to...thus comment on.

Keep on trucking,
Eclipse.
x x x x x (and an) O

Wow this is amazing,.. very solid and intwined with itself.
reminds me about the truth of ourselves. of what a bath can really be! (spanish bath?) :p