I loved it. :]
amazing poem.
i know exactly how you feel, hun.
keep it up.
5/5

This is awesome! one of the most iportant things in life is having self confidence, because others can see it and find th person you are more appealing. a really interesting and inspiring piece of work, about a topic that not many touch upon. definately keep it up! xXx

More of a story than a poem but the repetition does bring some structure to it.
theres some great ideas and language here but i think you need to work on condensing your feelings into a more poetic structure, for example use a few metaphors rather than just writing your feelings...i know that the point of poetry is to express yourself but i think this could be improved if you add a bit more depth to it by using figurative language so that you express yourself but at the same time connect with the reader...

kim xx