My decision about you

by waiting 4 some1   Apr 6, 2007


They told me "he is using you and you are very kind"

"you don't see the truth he made you blind"

they advised me to break up with you and leave you behind

but i remained stubborn and never changed my mind

i know you love me and for it I don't need any guide

i can see it from your eyes and i can feel it from inside

for that i have chosen to stick with you and never leave your side

this was my last decision and i am aware of what I had decide

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  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Awesome. :D Brave words. Future can not been foreseen. I wish you would not have to ever regret your decision. But anyway, you are brave and didn't decide to take the easiest option only because it would be easier.

  • 17 years ago

    by Salwa

    Excellent..........i love this one. its says everything, without going overboard....

    perfect.

    salwa

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful poem...excellently penned...great rhyme scheme..u've put the very truth along with a sweet message across thru use of simple yet powerful words...great work!
    5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Sometimes you need to listen to what everyone has to say, then ignore them and follow your heart =)
    Excellent rhyming
    5/5
    *Gem*

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