This is an interesting poem. The flow was excellent as well as the structure. Great imagery.

Good Job 5/5

:Sarah:

I guess they no longer stock
My old body parts
No longer covered by warranty
At least not at my local Wal-Mart

This is real cute Sherry.....clever....55/ Debbie

Does it go in this catagory? i don't know. its up to you. i loved the way it was all set out tho. again another excellent poem.

5/5 David

Oh my gosh awsome poem

Lmao!! I love that poem!! Great Job!! The flow is wonderful and it's quite humorous!! I almost fell out of my chair I laughed so hard!! 5/5!!!
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Oh Sherry! This is so precious! If only we COULD get replacement parts!

This was cute, funny and very unique!

Marvelous stuff! A thoroughly enjoyable read. And so nice to see a funny poem posted in the funnies, rather than the virals that the kids like to post as their own. Thank you thank you thank you!

Very funny, imaginative and a great flow. 5.5/5

Loved the poem, it was delightfully hysterical.

Very interesting outlook on life I guess one\' can say and very funny at the sametime. The flow was good and structure as well. I really liked the way this poem was worded. Great Job.

Peace, Joe

AHAHAHAHAHA
Oh, this made me giggle.
I thought it flowed well throughout, the imagery was wonderfully done and the first stanza was such a great opener and from there on it just kept getting better and better.
You did a great job with this!

Wow excellent job, this mad me laugh the whole time, and definetly made my day happy =]

amazing

& still laughing
brittany (MD)

Very good poem, vey creative and interesting, you just went a little off with the flow sometimes, but it was very good keep it up.

Lol that was really good and very descriptive good job and keep up the work!! 5/5

"I could not believe my ears
When she told me to leave
She asked if I was crazy
I politely told her no
My name is Sherry"

lol : D

kind of a cute poem..... hee hee

This is a fun poem and I enjoyed reading it.

Wow. i don't know what a walmart is. but i thought this poem was funny. the way you turned it into going to find body parts that fit was just such a great idea. i loved it. great work 5/5

Hahaha... I just laughed picturing it all

Great idea for a very funny poem!