by firexdancer Apr 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
She wanders on the broken road |
by Nix
Ending is very effective and whole piece holds a lot emotions, I enjoy in it. The wording is simple but you still created great atmosphere. 5/5 |
You always do well in your ideas for a poem, they are so different i dont know how you come up with all oyur ieas lol. |
by Marc Ortiz
Wow.. it was very deep! another great poem! :) 5/5! |
Whoa . I loved how you ended it . At some parts I was likeee "What ??" but I really liked it . It was good . It had its emotion, and was deep . Well done . |
by David
Wat a great poem. again a 5/5 from me. |