Mm.. this was just so straight forward. there is something i like about your poems. i guess its the good flow, and penning. my favorite stanza:
I want to say I"m sorry
for being so naive
and for picking stupid people
and the wrong words to believe

i can relate to that.

a bit back i wrote about truths and lies, one of my poems is titled that.

keep it up.

Hm. This piece was ahhmazing. It actually made me think about all the times I've wanted to say sorry, but never really did. Due to the mere fact that sorry never helps everything. Hm. It did bring something out though. Quite the innocent write, if I do say so.

Amazing job. :]
5.0 / 5