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by Poetic Grunt
If I may make a suggetion... Instead of dream twice... maybe a "see what you've done to me" or "this is something I wish you could see" but over all alright job 4/5
by Gasttlee
I like this!
by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
The flow is alittle off but it is a grea write and your a great poet keep it up, nessa