The imagery in this is astounding, so pretty! I adore your choice of words, the flow was melodic, and the message is truly breathtaking. Awesome piece!

I loved it.
Great imagery.
Maybe add some punctuation, it messes with the flow at times.

Great job though. :]
Keep it up!

Nicely described... Very well thought out... Great job!

I like!! This reminds me of time when I went hiking years ago and found a clearing to sit on a log and write.
Very peaceful and soothing piece.

Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.

Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.

Beautifully descriptive. I could see it all.

I'm getting in back in my groove of reading my favorites...you're kicking ass all over town!!!! This is wondeful!!! You've painted a picture...I can SEE this...I can HEAR it...BEAUTIFUL!!!! I'm loving this!!!

Oh, wow, you have ability to write such powerful poem about nature, with great, vivid imagery and amazing and captivating atmosphere. Every stanza is simply beautiful, whole poem just paints wonderful pictures in my mind.