Another great poem. Very nice flow. I loved it:) 5/5

ICK.
Had a comment typed up and it deleted it.
GRR.

Anyhoo;

This poem isn't outstanding.
Its unoriginal and I've read a lot of poems on the same topic.
But, if your going to use a common topic, its fine, just push it further.
Make it unique in itself.
Describe more, Use nice vocab make it your own.

If I was a person who voted I'd say 3/5

It needs more flow.
Push yourself to your limits and show your creative side. =]

Haha this is a really sweet poem actually. i kinda get the impression of confusion in love, and childlike infatuation. Its cute, the way you end it especially. its almost like a journey! its lovely =]
Geo

This was really cute..i liked this one also..well i guess i like all your writing..your an amazing writer..

Wow. this is really good haha i can totally relate ... but i think everyone can too! thats why its a really good poem ,,, because its not just about something random that nobody gets, you like... connect to all the people reading the poem because they can all imagine it when it happened to them
this is really good
keep it upp : )
<3jess

Wow...good job on this poem girly! i can relate to missing someone cuz my boyfriend lives in flordia and i havent seen him in two years...i could really relate to this poem and you did an excellent job on it : ) 5/5

Aww, I know how you feel. That's what happens when I don't see my fiance, or when he's not with me. I loved it. Definately on my favs.5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Nice poem
it reminds me of how i hate to be away from my boy but when i see him after not seeing him for a while it can be one of the sweetest moments.
well done.
5/5

xx

I think it's good...umm the flow could have a tiny more work on!..but it's otherwise..great!
***aLy***

Great poem i loved it