Lots of emotion, kinda feel like that too. Great poem!

Hmm. I loved the emotion in this piece, you got it out and you stayed on topic but however, I do think it was a little cliched with all the other poems, I don't know it's kind of like you read on depression poem, youve read them all. I love the quality of writing you have it just seems you could expand and do a lot moer with your talent, but you're still young...I hope you do extend your writing though, you could do great things! (:

I absolutely loved this...this is the type of poem i like...yes i could feel a lot of emotion coming off of it...I liked your rhyming scheme...it's the type i use most often...great work

I liked this poem alot.
You did a great job!
5/5

~Chelsea