Comments : Painful rumors

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I like the meaning behind this poem you portrayed this very well. Good work
    ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Well yes...Rumors hurt a lot...and so does judgement of someone I guess there sorta the same thing...This poem was good the rhyming of different things kind of through me off but overall it was good

  • 17 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Aww i liked this 1! it was sad but fulfilling because the advice is great, thats right, dont let no1 put you down!
    nuff luv x

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, this was great hunni, I loved it. The flow worked perfectly and the descriptions were well done. I loved the ideas that went into this and the imagery was great. I also liked the metaphors you used. WOnderful job, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissie

    Aww i love it!! Its so encouraging to those who have had rumours spread about them. A very helpful poem and very well-written. Alot of feeling. Keep it up. Xx Chrissie

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    This was good. Very inspirational. I know how it feels to have rumors spread around about you. It's hard, & very painful. You portrayed that very well. It flowed nicely, nothing really seemed forced.

    Their the reason for every tear you shed. [Their should be 'They're' or 'They are]

    But there always there [there should be 'they're' or 'they are', as well]

    Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I hate rumors. anyway another great poem!! I'll give this a 5/5! :) I like your advice.. 'just ignore the rumors' :) I enjoyed this poem! keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Rumors hurt, i know the feeling. really really well written I liked this as well, the word choice was exceptional this time, the emtion was powerful, and the flow was amazing. really you should take a bow, for this is outstanding. 5/5