Hey plz read and comment my new poems. i want to know what u think

I like this poem, it focuses on a very nice topic, and I love how you use details in the poem. Very nice, 5/5.

Wow so wat umm tht style? its very interesting..this poem is yet another good poem from you...scared me for a lil..if u try to imagine it..a 5/5

Well done on writing this form of poetry you really did pull it off well. Your word choice was strong and powerful you put real depth into this piece. I enjoyed it from start to finish. The flow was flawless. All in all this was an amazing poem. ~mel

I really like the new style you tired here.
You described well and still told a story.
It's short, and I feel you could add to this, but it's still well written.
Nicely done.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5