This poems really nice i think its beautifully sad in its own way. The flow was a bit off in some places other then that though this was reaally cute. Well done ~mel

The words weakened the poem for me...I think if you edit it and choose better words it would make the poem a lot better overall it was a good poem and i liked the idea of it

The rhyming scheme for this was really good. I know how you feel, I can relate to the poem well. None the less it was well written.

This poem is really beautiful. The flow was perfect. It was wonderfully written. 5/5

Kalee

Aww this was so sad! and the flow and rhyme was great!
nuff luv x

Awhh i love this poem. its one of my favs. out of yours! it reminds me of myself and i can relate to it. great job! 5/5