If love were words your language is unclean
^^=) Very powerful lines..
True...so well said

The rest of the poem has good choice of words...though punctuation is a problem..Well expressed emotions...conveyed in a simple way..
Good job!
xxPoojaxx

#1. This was quite a nice read, Marc; in fact, it was quite interesting to note how finely written your earlier works were. Ah! Treachery, treachery; what a disgusting word! Like Pooja, I too find the following line quite eye-catching and compelling:

"If love were words your language is unclean"

Nice one, nevertheless. Thanks for sharing.

Best wishes,
Debbie