In the end

by Marc Ortiz   Apr 6, 2007


I kept everything inside in my mind
Even though I tried to hide my feelings
Everything had spin in my peaceful soul
And now I know nothing lasts in this life

All I know the seconds tick life away
In the end everything will disappear
In the end everyone will fall and die
Everything is falling apart in life

All things I do is another mistake
Im holding to tightly afraid to lose
All things is falling right in front of me
The tragedy has made my heart cold, numb

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  • 17 years ago

    by Artistic Fallen Angel

    I really like this you paint a really good picture in your poems with astounding words. I wish i could do that anyway really loved it. keep it up :D

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Txeeee, this is so sad...it makes me tremble...really...i mean, speaking of myself, i only write like this when i feel like this...
    (too often...)
    but this is really depressive...
    it's sure absolutely great, though...
    long live the free verse...;)
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Thanks Criptix Within

  • 17 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Great poem. Well penned. Keep up the great work. 5/5

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