Great poem. Well penned. Keep up the great work. 5/5

Thanks Criptix Within

Txeeee, this is so sad...it makes me tremble...really...i mean, speaking of myself, i only write like this when i feel like this...
(too often...)
but this is really depressive...
it's sure absolutely great, though...
long live the free verse...;)
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

I really like this you paint a really good picture in your poems with astounding words. I wish i could do that anyway really loved it. keep it up :D