Wow!!..this one is really cute....very touching..especialy the last stanza was good...simple yet nicely penned!
Great job!
5/5:)
xxPoojaxx

#3. This is quite beautiful, Mark; in fact, it made me connect to the time when I felt so wonderful being in love with a certain someone. Haha. =] It's a lovely tribute for the one you love. Although it didn't particularly flow well, it, nevertheless, is a spectacular work.

An endearing piece to say the least.

Best wishes,
Marian