Death

by Marc Ortiz   Apr 6, 2007


Death the final destination in life
Tonight is the night I will end my life.
There is no more hope in this filthy world
My death is a pleasing present for you.
Would someone kill me.. Swift, painless, instant
Will you cry? If I depart in this world
Place in the wilderness. Naked, alone
The moon illumines my dejected eye
Like the rain my tears are never-ending
The pain I feel is tormenting my heart
I am here without you my love. Alone
I am jealous to everyone I see
To you my love is never ending
Tonight my death is never ending.

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  • 16 years ago

    by lisabrighteyes

    Wow that last line !!

    another amazing poem!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    I really like this one...and i've felt the same way before many times.....yes its very painful... ^^i disagree with the person above.. i dont think you used some words too many times...

    nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Heya, I really liked this poem it was an enjoyable read. The only thing i think is you used some words to many times over. Other then that i liked this well done ~mel