Loneliness

by Marc Ortiz   Apr 6, 2007


The moon illumines my dejected eye
Tears start to pour unto my weeping eyes
My sense of touch makes me tremble
The sounds around me makes me feel unsafe
Filthy cold winds beaming forth
Tormenting my frail body
The agony of isolation is saddening me
The darkness irradiates my quiet pathway
I need my Guardian angel to enlighten my path
I need my love to keep me warm from my frigid life
I need her to make me whole again
I need her to make me feel I am young again
However long I stay I will always love you
I will always love you, I love you

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  • 16 years ago

    by lisabrighteyes

    Very powerful.
    I know this feeling ... i know it well!
    I loved this so much!
    5/5

    -lisa

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Great poem the only thing I seen wrong was the first line should be eyes instead of eye Thanks for the comment on "Destruction"

  • 17 years ago

    by ephemera

    Such a beautifully sad poem Marc. I feel every emotion you lay out. You are so very talented.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Sad...but Great write....very nice choice of words...Good work..fille wth emotions...an advice on personal basis-sum1 somewhere is meant to be yours..never give..Be patient..love n live!
    Great work!...kp up the good job!...
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by tyanna

    Another good poem.. You seem to have really loved this girl and I am sorry it didn't work out.. Your profile says you're 16 (I think). You're still young and will find the girl for you! I promise! Keep writting, it helps..5/5
    ~Taynna~

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