This was a great poem. I really enjoyed it. 5/5

Ok thanks Debbie I'll edit the poem :)

Oh this one it make me feel so sad... but one thing i noticed all about ur poems... all the topic is sad.. well i can feel u are emotional person... well keep on writing all what u feel....

Another good poem.. You seem to have really loved this girl and I am sorry it didn't work out.. Your profile says you're 16 (I think). You're still young and will find the girl for you! I promise! Keep writting, it helps..5/5
~Taynna~

Sad...but Great write....very nice choice of words...Good work..fille wth emotions...an advice on personal basis-sum1 somewhere is meant to be yours..never give..Be patient..love n live!
Great work!...kp up the good job!...
xxPoojaxx

Such a beautifully sad poem Marc. I feel every emotion you lay out. You are so very talented.

Great poem the only thing I seen wrong was the first line should be eyes instead of eye Thanks for the comment on "Destruction"

Very powerful.
I know this feeling ... i know it well!
I loved this so much!
5/5

-lisa