Good poem. The flow was excellent and the emotion was shown.
Good job 5/5

:Sarah:

Good poem. The flow was excellent and the emotion was shown.
Good job 5/5

:Sarah:

I really enjoyed reading this poem because i found it had alot of honesty running throughout it. You wrote this poem straight from your heart, mind and soul which is a great thing. Well done. ~mel

This is really good I loved it I kind of sang to it s it had good rhythm and I like how it was back and forth love and hate nice job