Tantalizing

by Sara   Apr 7, 2007


Take my heart
Paint it red
Then maybe
You'll fix my head

I might say
That I'm alright
But don't get too close
I might bite

The anger
Building inside of me
The pressure's rising

I just
Might have to let it free
So tantalizing

You said
You would be there for me
No more lying

Just take
Whatever it is you need
And get away from me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Hey hun, just wanna say first of all for commenting on my poem really apreciated. I liked this poem i think you have great potential one thing i would suggest though is to make all the stanzas have the same amount of lines. Your rhyming was cute though. Good work ~mel

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