I am

by StormXclusive   Apr 7, 2007


I am an empty vessel
Which when hit makes no sound,
I am the rain
But makes no noise when I hit the ground
I am a sheep
But I have strayed away from my master,
I am lightning
but the rain that falls is faster
i am the tears,
that falls and no one really cares
I am the lovely ring shining,
though even around me is breaking
I am the lost girl
lost but also running from the world,
I am the voice that can't be found
As when I speak it is never profound,
I am the rose
the rose that withered
The heart I am
that to pain I have surrendered
I am the sky
Now I am dark later I'll be brighter
I am a ghost,
Never have you seen one more whiter,
and I am the tears
that falls and no one really cares.

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  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Beautiful poem...
    keep on...

    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by KelseyinWonderland

    Hi, thanks for ur comment on my poem. Awesome poem by the way. The words collaborated so wonderfully and it was very vivid in detail. great job. 5/5

    ~K3!$3Y~

  • 17 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    Keep up the good work, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    I'm sorry to say.
    But this poem seemed to go on
    And on.
    Although it wasn't that long.
    It seemed as though it was.
    Maybe it's just
    One poem, though.
    I'll go check on the others, hmmkay?

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    This poem was well written. I liked how it flowed and I also enjoyed its comparisons and how the whole poem related to the title. Great job.

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